I am writing in the hope of pursuing advanced studies in the field of Marketing in Australia. Such studies, I believe, will put me in a position more competitive for today's market economy of China. I would like to scale new heights in my career.
Born in a family of senior intellectuals, I was cultivated to be aspirant with life when still a child. My parents put expectation on me. I always did excellently in my academic scores and never disappointed them. The entrance to universities is rather rigorous in China. The future of a student may be determined in the exam. When graduated from high school in l995, l was so nervous and failed in the exam unusually. I went to a two-year college study at Henan **** Institute, majored in Computerized Accounting. But I didn't lose my perseverance towards my goal. I studied hard and read widely. I had been occupied the first place in my two years' studies.
After graduation in l997, I went to a state-run company as a sales representative. I clearly understand I was limited in both academic background and working experience. Accordingly, I studied to a Bachelor Degree with Economic Management at Henan **** Institute while working. I gained my bachelor degree in l999. During the working period, I developed myself in all sides as a businessman. I have taken every opportunity to develop my interpersonal skills and made the most of my academic background. I have successfully developed my own client net, which made myself distinguished among my colleagues. Not satisfied with the achievements l had made, I now want to undertake a more advanced business program. University of Western Sydney is one of the largest in Australia. The Marketing course of the University of Western Sydney is recognized throughout the world. I would great appreciate it if you could approve my application. I am confident that I will give full play to my intellectual potential in academic study. It should come as no surprise to you if I become one superior businessman on the Chinese economy a few years after l graduated from your university.
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I am writing in the hope of pursuing advanced studies in the field of Marketing in Australia. Such studies, I believe, will put me in a position more competitive for today's market economy of China. I would like to scale new heights in my career.
Born in a family of senior intellectuals, I was cultivated to be aspirant with life when still a child. My parents put expectation on me. I always did excellently in my academic scores and never disappointed them. The entrance to universities is rather rigorous in China. The future of a student may be determined in the exam. When graduated from high school in l995, l was so nervous and failed in the exam unusually. I went to a two-year college study at Henan **** Institute, majored in Computerized Accounting. But I didn't lose my perseverance towards my goal. I studied hard and read widely. I had been occupied the first place in my two years' studies.
After graduation in l997, I went to a state-run company as a sales representative. I clearly understand I was limited in both academic background and working experience. Accordingly, I studied to a Bachelor Degree with Economic Management at Henan **** Institute while working. I gained my bachelor degree in l999. During the working period, I developed myself in all sides as a businessman. I have taken every opportunity to develop my interpersonal skills and made the most of my academic background. I have successfully developed my own client net, which made myself distinguished among my colleagues. Not satisfied with the achievements l had made, I now want to undertake a more advanced business program. University of Western Sydney is one of the largest in Australia. The Marketing course of the University of Western Sydney is recognized throughout the world. I would great appreciate it if you could approve my application. I am confident that I will give full play to my intellectual potential in academic study. It should come as no surprise to you if I become one superior businessman on the Chinese economy a few years after l graduated from your university.
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